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嵐斕
@虛鏡
7 months agoReply
虛鏡
感謝您花時間與心力閱讀，並我找出問題與提出意見。

在開坑前就有想過遊魂個性在劇情上的相關風險，結果還是駕馭不來。

還有一些描述上的基本功未能到位，以及校稿不確實的問題。

再次感謝您的提點。
7 months agoReply
嵐斕
@虛鏡,(⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)b
7 months agoReply
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