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菜根
克蘇魯圈圈劍!!!
1 year agoReply
蔓陀羅
恭喜通關，修稿應該要留到故事完結後才行了，可是正在寫的後續#36我只完成70％ 趕不上讓你通關前看呀，感到有點可惜。

這篇目前正在寫的#36，是妹妹首次按自己意志完全變身啊！
1 year agoReply
菜根
@蔓陀羅,讚啦~
1 year agoReply
蔓陀羅
居然還有#18之後，真是既驚喜又意外，戰鬥部份模糊是希望引人腦補畫面（但不知成功否？），記得早前你說没看見像世界危機的東西啊，所以剛更新的「慶功派對」，終於露尾了。
1 year agoReply
菜根
讚~~~讀者魔會看六萬字左右也就是200分鐘
1 year agoReply
蔓陀羅
小提琴沒弦，因為當刻是一個彃鋼琴，另一人是直接用頭髮代替小提琴弦，但没令你有這聯想，代表是作者失敗。

你讓我發現能改善的地方了，多謝。

小隊内的確是有部分隊員吃人。
多謝幫忙發現錯字，該是汽車，手誤打成氣車。
1 year agoReply
菜根
OK~
1 year agoReply
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