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Bubblegumgabber

This reminds me of another poem about keys i cant remember, but held this flicker of uncertainty in the slight changes we glimpse in those closest to us I really enjoyed this one much more than eh eh I would say its tattoo worthy.

3 years agoReply

bunnybear

seriously? i thought this one was kind of cringy...

i like that you can't remember it. feels suitable

2 years agoReply

Bubblegumgabber

@bunnybear, i guess it would be suitable lol and no cringe at all i actually think those words might go on me somewhere

2 years agoReply

bunnybear

@Bubblegumgabber, yeah lol, it just seems quite poetic !
i don't really know what you mean..

2 years agoReply

Bubblegumgabber

@bunnybear, i agree its poetic is all and that i admired the poem a lot and i tend to have a list of tattoos i get when something really hits home.

2 years agoReply

bunnybear

@Bubblegumgabber, ty :) that's cool!

2 years agoReply

Bubblegumgabber

@bunnybear, np xD and awesome i was thinking the format was amazing and was gonna try for something like this.

Key to my future
And to my past-

When 'K' stands for

Knowing exactly who i am

When 'e' stands for

Everything that i need

When 'y' stands

Why

Sooner could we not meet

2 years agoReply

bunnybear

@Bubblegumgabber, so cool!! and remarkably less cringy.

2 years agoReply

Bubblegumgabber

@bunnybear, i really dont think the og is cringy at all your poems are so honest and sweet its hard to cringe at them

2 years agoReply

bunnybear

@Bubblegumgabber, aw, i appreciate that a lot, butttt this one will always be a little cringe in my eyes. i like it, but not as much as the others :)

2 years agoReply

Bubblegumgabber

@bunnybear, i get that theres definitely somethings ive written thatll fall into that category.