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3 years agoReply
王俊喬
多謝你嘅回覆！我都係第一次寫咁長篇嘅小說，有咩不足請隨便講出嚟。我都覺得自己唔係好識氣氛上嘅描寫，第二期會諗吓點處理。

至於殭屍同正常人無異呢一點，其實個故事就係想講殭屍同人類無乜分別，佢哋之間最大嘅差異就係殭屍要靠吸收人類嘅氣先至可以生存。可能有啲殭屍會同人類好friend㖭。去到後面啲集數仲會有人打人，人同殭屍一齊打殭屍，人同殭屍一齊打人，啲關係可以好複雜。

希望你睇得開心！

By 趕第二期趕到嘔血嘅作者
4 years agoReply
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