This was so sad, that my heart actually swelled (figuratively speaking)... I loved the way you showed how Jay came back for Rose and even after he was dead he wanted her to be happy... It was just too adorable to be expressed in words!
Though I'd like to say you could have made it better by telling how Jay died so that the reader could have had a background:)
But overall, a very gripping and tragically romantic story written! Thank you for participating!
Though I'd like to say you could have made it better by telling how Jay died so that the reader could have had a background:)
But overall, a very gripping and tragically romantic story written! Thank you for participating!
Two chapters.
Go check Romance Fest! ...