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MooreGirl1
Well I've got news for you "newbie" your writing is amazing and I enjoyed your story! There was a lot of creativity and I especially loved how it was a little boy with the reflection of their faces. I thought it not having a specific name was cool too and how he quickly ruined the land and caused so much chaos. Great job!
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