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解于薑茶
首先非常感謝大大的閱讀和評論！！
關於「的」、「得」、「地」三字的使用我自己也意識到這個問題了，會做修改和訂正的，造成觀感不佳真是抱歉😭😭
大大的評論確實說到了我目前自己覺得不足的地方，感謝大大給了我比較具體的方向！！然後關於封略進紅城前的部分我會想辦法找地方說明的，這個地方是我沒有注意到的
最後還是要感謝大大❤ (立馬去修
5 years agoReply
解于薑茶
還有就是，我會開始努力推劇情的，畢竟這個才是重點(汗
5 years agoReply
林立
台灣方面，「地」和「的」已經通用了，所以通通用「的」可以避免錯誤。這樣就只要注意，動詞後面要用「得」就好。
5 years agoReply
解于薑茶
@林立,明白了，謝謝大大！
5 years agoReply
香淚月
也謝謝大大提供作品給我評論🤣🤣🤣
5 years agoReply
解于薑茶
@香淚月,🤣🤣
5 years agoReply
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