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純讀者
「如放暗器一樣放出十二道光芒。」



四個方位，四支標應該係十六道光？
3 years agoReply
葉嘉勞
你參加了校對挑戰?要發一章登記,我才能打賞
3 years agoReply
純讀者
@葉嘉勞，冇呀，見到問一下、明顯錯別字改一改，係因為覺得幾好睇，更希望之後嘅讀者體驗更好。
希望你唔介意。
3 years agoReply
葉嘉勞
@純讀者,唔介意。見你幫我改左好多錯，但無參加挑戰。不然可以打賞你
3 years agoReply
執筆之路
我稍微改了一下。可以看出文中還存在了一些粵語的口頭語，而且在句子的格式上有點刻意。

所以我還是從最新的開始改好了XD
3 years agoReply
水靈
其實依一部係叫做異界之我本平凡定係成神之路？有啲亂
10 years agoReply
葉嘉勞
叫異界之我本平凡下半部 成神之路
10 years agoReply
Pak Ho Chan
獸國國王，平凡做定了！
10 years agoReply
Hill Chan
Op
10 years agoReply
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