So, I just edited the last three chapters and the intro for you.  I really like the concept of this story, as well. Is this a true story? I think this is really relatable because girls (not just shy girls) aren't allowed to be as open about their sexuality as boys get to be. Girls have to be hush-hush about it. If this is a true story I suggest masturbating. It will help a lot especially if you have pent up frustration. Just don't hurt yourself lol. Find something that feels good and suits you.

Overall, I really like this story, it just becomes hard to read because if all the grammar mistakes. They are a bit distracting but I will continue to edit these mistakes out, that is, if you accept them. Really relatable story, though!