Some errors (sorry if it seems like i'm nitpicking):
"But you we're strange" should be "But to you we're strange."

"You have a soul......But you're vessels seems empty" Try: "But you appear as empty vessels." or "But you're empty vessels."

"But you're body were filled with marks......" "You're" should be "your" and "were" should be "was".

"........as if they also controlled your mind." "If" should be taken out of the sentence.

"But you're not considered as a human" Should be "But you're not considered to be human."

"It has a limbs" Just take "a" out of the sentence.

"I destroyed you're vessel." "You're" should be "your."

"As of a god" I think "Like a god" or "As of it were a god."