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寫的很不錯啊！雖然劇情推導的有點快（你沒資格說！
但基本的要素都有出來，剩下的就在於要去想如何把這種心情再去加深綿長，不然像風一樣咻的就過去了，就太可惜了
10 years agoReply
倪語
謝謝姐姐❤
小可也是覺得寫的太少了...
但是小可覺得已經有挑戰到以前的風格，雖然不知道是進步還是退步。
但還是謝謝姐姐^_^
10 years agoReply
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