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Because
這篇簡單些，沒什麼好評的，正常 發揮，很平穩的一篇。
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
👍👍👍👍👍
7 years agoReply
Because
又要爬了
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
唉呦，辛苦了😅😅😅
感謝你~~但是篇剛剛我又看了一次，覺得沒有剛剛那篇好，辣你眼睛了OQ
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@月魂伶,然後我發現我好像真的對米迦勒很有意見XD
7 years agoReply
Because
@月魂伶,剛剛那篇，你現在去看時也會發現不足吧，太油膩的感覺……🤣🤣🤣
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because , 油膩？
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@月魂伶,話說，我覺得這篇只有第一段的前言和最後一段的結語寫得還行(掩面
7 years agoReply
Because
@月魂伶,有些陳述太單一，互動不足，月什麼的反應不夠對手好，天使那邊太優勢，平衡感不好。
7 years agoReply
Because
現在的你再寫，應該會好些，畢竟你成長了很多。
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because , 好的，筆記筆記(´⊙ω⊙`)
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because , 好窩，感謝鼓勵(づ ●─● )づ
7 years agoReply
Because
@月魂伶,簡單點說，就是月什麼沒有做好小受的本份，又沒逃跑，連不好都沒說， 掙扎都沒有掙扎過 ，這個小受不合格。（ 蓋印）
7 years agoReply
Because
@月魂伶,最後還好意思要飲料……( ง °皿°)ง⁼³₌₃
7 years agoReply
Minz月月
@Because , 哈哈好哦~嗯，小受三部曲：尖叫，掙扎，逃跑……？這樣？
7 years agoReply
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