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瀧介
其實我還滿好奇那外力是如何形成的😆

這故事讓人充滿了疑問呀，不過這樣的 寫法 還不錯，至於我在規則中提到的液體，實在是太好加入了，不管是汗水還是喝的茶，都是液體，這廣泛的規則，誰都能寫的出來😄
7 years agoReply
兀心
現在發現定太寬好像太慢了ＸＤＤＤ
7 years agoReply
瀧介
@兀心,唉，糟透了，下次用一個難點的
7 years agoReply
兀心
@瀧介,（拍肩
7 years agoReply
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