Ah, the woes of young love! I like it. I think the descriptions are well described and when she said to him that he doesn't have a proper palace 'cause he doesn't have a queen. A very strong personality for a child Malkia which you managed to maintain even when she's an adolescent. The same thing goes for Yasu/Scott too. Nice consistency :)
Ah, yes, sorry, I was going for something a little deeper. Kind of a young love but the reality of growing-up hits vibe, because a lot of people can relate to that, I feel. But definitely did not intend it to be super sad, just wanted to capture a different aspect of romance that I have never worked with before lol :)
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it hurts....
:=(
it was truly and really sad...