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I get the picture of Kristen's situation and geez, her mum was just horrible for doing that to her. Maybe you haven't had much time to edit it but there's quite a number of technical errors such as the lack of comma and spaces but I think with a quick fix up, it will be fine :)
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Thank you for the advice, I'll keep it in mind, I was very young when I first wrote these earlier chapters, so there are errors in them :) but I'm glad you like it.
@Narcissusflower, Ah, I see well no worries aha :)
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