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楠都月
謝謝你那麼快就看完第一卷了！🫡🌟
其實我有時會想我回憶篇會不會寫太長影響到主線節奏了......幸好還有人喜歡🥹🥹🥹
很開心你會看下去！ 我會努力更文的！
大家也快看概念• 世界！ 世界觀挺有趣的😎 劇情進展節奏好，會讓人一直想接着看下去😉 （我很好奇主角的能力和聲音的秘密！
9 hours agoReply
Lethe
嗯，說實話有些回憶的確有點長
但我個人覺得長也沒關係，只要寫得好看就好
像我就覺得孤兒院那邊很不錯

主角的能力秘密我其實已經寫好一半了，他是主線劇情，大概再幾個禮拜後就會上傳了
（其實我也擔心會不會拖太久🤔🤣
9 hours agoReply
楠都月
@Lethe,好的！ 不過我閱讀的速度沒你快🤣我慢慢看
9 hours agoReply
Lethe
@楠都月,沒關係的，慢慢看不要有壓力。
知道有人在看對我來說我就很開心了👍👍
9 hours agoReply
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