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夏沚
謝謝你的欣賞。
3 days agoReply
車有木
感謝參加，以下為我的一些感想，非專業評論，看看便可：

這篇模仿古詞的創作，從韻腳、句式和用詞看來，能明顯感受到作者深受李清照〈如夢令〉的影響，藉古言今，作者對文學的造詣令人讚嘆。

以記憶為媒介，去感受春夏漸逝，時間逝於水的悲傷，並點出使人們回首的，是那個還在心頭難以放下的故人，道盡傷感。
3 days agoReply
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