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Comments - 《陰暗森林的觀察日記》類末日恐懼。 | Penana
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嚮往國度
主角的衝勁很讚，尤其那句不論什麼怪物在武力下還是得屈服很喜歡XDDD
3 weeks agoReply
夜沐
老實說這個角色不是太討喜。比起主角群的故事，犧牲者篇章中很多角色都是筆下所描述帶有瑕疵的人物，因為他們的不合群，孤立，甚至扭曲，而成為了陰暗森林的犧牲者⚰️🪦

噢對，這個不是主角，前期的角色都太弱了。真正的主角是戰鬥民族國家來的人，等他們出來後會深刻體會到，什麼叫作長期蠻橫支配大自然的傢伙們，究竟有多強⚔️
3 weeks agoReply
小魚一尾
第一人稱的內心戲用得很好耶～甘拜下風，不過也許能加入一些現實動作（？
1 month agoReply
夜沐
小聲說，平常內心戲跟小世界太多的人，才有這麼多廢話能駕馭第一人稱視角的內心獨白🤣
1 month agoReply
玄石
沐大太猛了吧!居然同時更新兩篇故事:D
1 month agoReply
夜沐
畢竟也算是輪流寫，作業量沒有實質提升，反倒是可以換換心情😊
1 month agoReply
玄石
我也要!(你做不到@夜沐,
1 month agoReply
夜沐
@玄石
我才不會這麼說話呢ww
1 month agoReply
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