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小魚一尾
@提米糕
3 months agoReply
提米糕
好的好的，還在上班，晚點回去看~
3 months agoReply
提米糕
剛剛看完了~
總之謝謝大大的心得。
關於兩位主角的性格和妳說的相近，而前半部份的故事也主要圍繞在他們身上，關於他們同僚的篇幅會在之後的篇章有所著墨，因為小弟的能力不足，沒有那麼多能力一下子塑造這麼多角色，還要考慮邏輯、內核還有其他面向，所以前期大概圍繞在主角兩人周圍而已~

節奏的部分確實偏快沒錯，所以也有可能缺乏調配結構或是讓讀者休息的篇章就是了qq


總之，再次感謝您的心得，也祝您在新的一年寫作能順利，下筆有如神，然後天天開心呦~
3 months agoReply
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