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青月
其实这世界观呢是迁的day1=凝的day99，至于那本 平行宇宙，他的内容在两个世界是会有相似 但会有细节上的不同 至于他的作者  在更后面会解释。
至于为什么互相的笔记会影响到对方是因为前搬运者，也就是199号做的事(这也是个后期内容)
其实我现在还有很多伏笔还没回收⦁֊⦁꧞
还有我的剧情节奏是不是有点太快了˃ʍ˂
说真的后面合并起来不是我最一开始的想法，但既然想到了就想说尝试一下
这故事我本来是想藏很多疑问下去让读者自己慢慢连接起来，拼成完整的故事，但似乎做的太麻烦了ww。
但还是谢谢晨大的点评，我会好好努力的ww
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
我改天來重看（有強迫症想把劇情弄懂）
3 months agoReply
青月
@晨星．死神,可以的，有什么不明白的可以问我哈哈
3 months agoReply
晨星．死神
@青月,好的,謝謝舉辦創挑呦～
3 months agoReply
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