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Guro4OS
青綠色杯子 後面有用到，我是用"契訶夫的槍"筆法，好幾次看到獵槍，讀者就會預期會有開槍的場景，我希望讀者知道我會用到它了，但要怎麼更自然我在研究一下。
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
謝謝參加～
5 months agoReply
Guro4OS
我好開心，你發現了，我就是故意讓士村這樣，
「我是莊士村！你是......請問品義在家嗎？我今天來探望他！」
這句我就在埋怪異了，準備後面章節的反轉了。
因為他是穿越過來的人(第一次反轉)，然後10年沒見，對！主角死了(第二次反轉暴雷)，然後士村因為自責自殺前穿越了(因為要看到20年後樣子，但他穿越卻是30歲的模樣，第三次反轉)
我這個場景目前會處理這三次劇情。我希望讀者知道再來重看會覺得很驚訝。
所以他是大人偽裝成高中生的樣子，可能沒看後面章節，代表我創造的異樣感有被發現，太棒了！謝謝
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@Guro4OS
5 months agoReply
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