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藏在酒裡的檸檬
小抓蟲：
「高」爾夫

希望不會讓泥不開心🥹
5 months agoReply
林絡緹
不會！有留言我就很開心😆
然後我剛才去看了一下，原來我在POPO的版本有改掉，這邊是從初稿抽取出來的，所以就沒改到🫠
5 months agoReply
藏在酒裡的檸檬
但其實不影響閱讀就是了笑死
然後我原本還有打最後一句「帶了出」
但不確定是原本文法就這樣，還是要表示「帶出了」🥹
5 months agoReply
林絡緹
@藏在酒裡的檸檬, 這個我沒注意到，但這樣一看又覺得你說的有道理，我本來寫的時候是用「帶出去」這樣的感覺。

讓我琢磨一下😆
5 months agoReply
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