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小邁
愛是包羅萬有🥲
感覺女裝的夏會很好看，只是，她這麼衝動嗎……！還有春和秋，剛確認彼此心意，就要在公共場所接吻嗎！
4 months agoReply
Leafutre
當初想了很久，要怎麼創造一個既俐落又有爆點的結局，稍微犧牲了點動機，可能導致角色動機稀薄，行為沒有說服力。我想到的解決辦法是，用渡夏的猛烈心理獨白，去掩蓋那些有點不合理的舉動，沒想到還是被看出來了。
p.s春秋那段的靈感源自於現實生活，想不到吧，現實正是如此魔幻（
4 months agoReply
小邁
@Leafutre ,我覺得是個好辦法，只是還需要多點筆墨去寫。既要完整又要簡潔，好難。
4 months agoReply
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