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茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

好溫柔美麗的愛 (*´  `* )
冬雪、夏風、春櫻、秋葉，與綻放的花火，一年四季的陪伴和愛慕滿溢而出，成為忠貞信仰。
「相尋夢里路，飛雨落花中。」這句好有畫面感，很喜歡寧織描寫的甜甜日系愛情！
11 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
評語：在我看來，這是一封浪漫至極的情書，以情景做連結，表達了對女孩的愛。愛意充斥著整個螢幕，那小心翼翼的愛，處處都是愛慕的粉紅泡泡，能深刻的感受到主角愛戀的熾熱眼神。
11 months agoReply
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