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AnFr安鍅
評語：這篇蠻有那種末日獵人世界的感覺，彼方超帥，很像那種冷靜有經驗的主角師傅型，前輩交代的話也很合理。那個「狗勾」獵人真的笑死，一秒領便當，對比很強烈，雖然好笑但也讓人瞬間意識到世界的危險。最後那句「我沒開玩笑」收得不錯，有把一開始的話再強調一次，感覺會是個很燃的故事開頭！
11 months agoReply
茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

好可愛的開戰前短打，強到靠北那邊直接笑出來w 喜歡的意思。
1 year agoReply
月穎靈
超可愛的狗勾哈哈哈XDDDDD
感謝參加！但請注意，「我沒開玩笑」要記得以亮藍色標記呦～
1 year agoReply
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