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然後按「加至主畫面」
但還是有些地方需要改進，會繼續努力的
我覺得這不算偏題，要說偏的話就是為誰而痛這一點不太明確，比較像是在敘述霸凌者對受害者造成的傷害。
但還是很謝謝能讓我知道自己的文筆和內容需要改進
謝謝提供這樣的建議😊😊
下次會在改進！也會多多練習自己的文筆