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珞玥
陌上花和屈少的對峙，別有韻味呢！
終究是護主心切，沒有考慮到身份的問題 XD~

結尾處女主角的猜想
基本上是合理的，只是沒有想到
解開狐裘的，另有其人…（笑
7 months agoReply
原子能
迅速深化男主形象，屈少勤，你遇到一個好作者啊，屈少勤不再只是一個溫文爾雅的質子，他懂醫術、觀察力敏銳、行事果決且有分寸。送藥這一行為，既體現了他的善良和示好，也展現了他的智慧，不卑不亢，進退有度，這才是皇子該有的氣度！陌上花雖然衝動了點，但也是護主心切，忠犬屬性。最後道歉那段處理得真好，屈少勤真是溫柔本身。
8 months agoReply
羽璇
很喜歡屈少送湯進來時，兩人稍微對峙的氣氛
對話很順，很有條理～
也很有代入感
王爺莫名有氣勢ＸＤ
國師弟子不愧非凡阿
10 months agoReply
商澐
大概就是從這裡阿陵覺得他有點風骨，才對他感興趣
10 months agoReply
黑靈
好奇為什麼屈少勤懂藥理。陌上花以下犯上，屈少勤也沒怪責她，可見他的胸襟廣闊
10 months agoReply
商澐
都是伏筆～
10 months agoReply
Yuki Selune
不錯內 對話很流暢 字數多但看的很順。
11 months agoReply
商澐
難得你的留言如此正常
11 months agoReply
Yuki Selune
@商澐,？
你對我有錯誤的刻板印象
11 months agoReply
商澐
@Yuki Selune,正確的刻板印象
11 months agoReply
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