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AnFr安鍅
評語：第一次看到詩歌體參加我的創挑！

寫得很好呢～但唯一可惜的是文章之中沒有放入創挑題目的句子。而是直接設定為文章的題目～

不過沒關係，好的作品值得被接納！

很喜歡詩中的一句，「每一個夜晚都像是絕望的重播」，很貼切本人生活的那種壓抑感。
1 year agoReply
Lifer_Lighdow
很感謝你喜歡。其實，人生不過也就如此
1 year agoReply
Lifer_Lighdow
但我希望，緊握你的那雙手，是充滿希望與溫暖的小手
1 year agoReply
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