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響木
好的，又出現一個法萊雅末期症患者~"~
2 years agoReply
子不語
改了一下文章，新給了一些意見～
2 years agoReply
響木
@子不語,感謝你誠實的感想！的確，我知道對不少讀者來說第一章的節奏可能太慢了，不過因為第一章的內容實際上牽連相當廣，要修改的話是項大工程，真的要修也只能等到第十章完成後再來想辦法了~
2 years agoReply
子不語
@響木, 整個作品的感覺上就像是法式全餐，但是第一章就像炸過頭，超乾超柴的一大桶前菜薯條。
所以一堆讀者吃到超乾柴薯條後就勸退了，沒有辦法享受豐盛的正餐，殊為可惜。
2 years agoReply
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