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夢中笑
呦~還挺厲害的嘛^O^
2 years agoReply
花栗榛果醬
呦～你也快點寫一篇辣😏😏😏
2 years agoReply
W.H.
哈哈哈～👍！！

怎麼辦，我比較喜歡不正經的版本⋯⋯

要不要加個詩題，詩題如果起得好，有畫龍點睛的效果。

啊！我懂了，詩題就是〈三行詩〉！隱題藏頭詩～
2 years agoReply
花栗榛果醬
欸嘿嘿是嗎～(๑`灬´๑)不正經版本雖然不正經，但能被喜歡還是超級高興的啦！

哦哦！被發現是藏頭詩了，好厲害～我好喜歡被發現的感覺🥰
那詩題就先不改了哦(´∀｀)♡
2 years agoReply
W.H.
ok!!

我也常常寫藏頭詩啊：

penana.com/article/1060773

隱題藏頭又藏尾哦！

@花栗榛果醬
2 years agoReply
花栗榛果醬
@W.H.,好棒耶！！٩(๑^o^๑)۶

但果然藏頭藏尾要說出來比較容易被注意到呢XDD
看來我能這麼快被發現非常幸運😏W.H.好敏銳！
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@花栗榛果醬,我看的新詩不算少 (但也不算多)，讀過兩本台灣新詩史，而且我之前辦過三個新詩創挑啊 (有一個變成事故樓就是了～
2 years agoReply
花栗榛果醬
@W.H.,原來是有一定的新詩底子✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

三個創挑(⊙o⊙)我是新來的啦～原來錯過這麼多啊！
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@花栗榛果醬,底子嗎？哈哈，我希望自己是無底洞哩！！(不是指胃袋，是好奇心❤️

你可以慢慢看啊，我在留言區也寫了不少自己的思考，可以參考看看，當然，廢話也不少啦～
2 years agoReply
花栗榛果醬
@W.H.,好奇心好可愛XD～

好呀( ￣▽￣)慢慢看～如果是在暑假發現這些就好了呢OwO
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@花栗榛果醬,有空再看就好啦～沒看也沒關係啊^^
2 years agoReply
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