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晴空下的雨
第一次寫小說，這樣的劇情安排跟人物對話已經很值得讚賞！

值得注意改進的部分是標點符號的正確運用，例如：「～」波浪號──這個符號通常在正式小說裡面是不會用到的，因為它其實不算是一個正式的文學標點符號。如果是想要表現出聲音的延續，正常我們會使用「──」破折號。

關於標點符號的運用方面，你可以再多了解一下。
2 years agoReply
秘密護法
好的，謝謝你，我會多多注意，我現在先去改錯的地方!
2 years agoReply
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