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咖喱雞
不好意思，想請問一下。主角的視角怎麼忽然間從餵食鳥的同學變成目睹餵食鳥的同學..？還是我哪裡誤會了？🤔
2 years agoReply
貓枯
我只是想讓從別的視角看看，其實地板上沒有鳥XDDD，有點幻覺的感覺
2 years agoReply
咖喱雞
@蝶半醒,喔～ 矮細！我還以為是穿越書中的關係，主角為了要完成一本書，需要經歷不同角色這樣。若是如此，唰的一下飾演不同人物那樣感覺超帥的。哈哈哈🤣
（（抱歉，我又在自言自語了。

故事本體非常通順。內容還會用比較口語化（像是粗話）去帶出主角本身的個性我覺得蠻不一樣的。故事設定也很有創意。希望作者能完成這部作品。🙂👍
2 years agoReply
貓枯
@咖喱雞,
謝謝耶ꈍ .̮ ꈍ
應該，會完成（嗎？
我等《為世界拍張照》更新我再更
不用怕，她上次更新正文才八個月前而已
2 years agoReply
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