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ArthoniaVinquire
Yeah I was thinking about editing put the dialogue that but in comics characters usually have a lot of back and forth banter so thats it actually reflects their characters. I sparsely ever write fights just to write fights there's usually character presence that needs to be accounted for. This is especially important this isn't from an action novel. Also I've been a lot of fights and I've seen a lot of fights to know half of the actual fights are just people yelling at each other for two minutes between like every five punches.
9 個月前回覆
Mr Carrion
You never want fight scenes to be broken up with long bits of dialogue. It messes with the pacing. Its why anime is so hard to watch. One guy swings a sword and then the next guy goes on an 11 minute rant about the technique of said swing.
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