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Donald Jiang
你的意見超級中肯的，所以可以給我點意見嗎，我也是一個新人，我急需意見😹🙏🏻
2 years agoReply
But
？怎麼個中肯法，我挺好奇的——說說唄？
2 years agoReply
Donald Jiang
@But,就是說很中重點
2 years agoReply
But
@Donald Jiang,你這樣很無趣啊，無趣的人寫的小說也很沒有意思。

特別是不懂別人想看什麼。
2 years agoReply
But
@Donald Jiang,不過，行。咱私聊。
2 years agoReply
Donald Jiang
@But,好的😹👌🏻
2 years agoReply
傅
好，有空會去拜讀的，感謝你
2 years agoReply
But
你是用手機看嗎？那些我推薦的小說和網站我都有連結的，點擊就會傳送。
2 years agoReply
But
另外，最好不要有空再去看，你現在的情況一個人琢磨要滿久的，直接去看別人會怎麼比較好。
2 years agoReply
But
主要是我知道你不會去看。
2 years agoReply
傅
@But,好的
2 years agoReply
傅
@But,會啦，只是我現在預定的進度是1.開膛手傑克的告白,2.悲劇...（借了，但忘記具體書名了）3.賓客名單（你的要排在後面
2 years agoReply
But
@傅,？有點不懂。
但我不建議你繼續挖坑開新書，專心寫完一本對你比較有幫助。
2 years agoReply
傅
@But,不是新書，是我要看的書的進度
2 years agoReply
But
@傅,那是我小瞧你了。
2 years agoReply
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