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湘坵
說好的素肉呢www
2 years agoReply
　
@湘坵,一句話帶過不夠素嗎？？？
2 years agoReply
湘坵
@٩(｡柳ω夢｡)و,比我想像中的葷（？（這什麼形容詞
2 years agoReply
阿掌
是說，內文裡打「旎旎間」是要打「旖旎間」嗎？
2 years agoReply
　
@阿掌,不是，就是要打「旎旎間」～
2 years agoReply
阿掌
@柳夢,那這個旎旎，該作何解呢
2 years agoReply
阿掌
@柳夢,啊，我查到了！那還真是……很有畫面呢
2 years agoReply
　
@阿掌,濃郁柔和，兩個方向，一邊是感情一邊是味道
2 years agoReply
阿掌
@柳夢,腦中沒有這個詞彙，學到了呢！
2 years agoReply
　
@阿掌,這是特別設計過的一句，被你發現XD
2 years agoReply
阿掌
@柳夢,我偶爾也是細節怪（？？？
2 years agoReply
阿掌
哇～才第二章就這麼刺激的嗎？我沒看過BL，這是第一次，大家都這麼豪放嗎XD？作者文筆真好～

另外徐惠風和雷千朗以往不是都單住一間房嗎？那麼惠風是如何有「總是讓千朗先用浴室」這個習慣的呢？
2 years agoReply
　
@阿掌,沒想到阿掌還會繼續看😅後面還有床戲的，會比較那個一點⋯⋯（掩面）

文中的「讓千朗先用浴室」是指在德國的時候，因為劇情的時間點已經是在德國的最後一天晚上，在德國期間都是千朗先用浴室～！
2 years agoReply
阿掌
@柳夢,原來如此！看來是我看不夠仔細誤會了^^
2 years agoReply
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