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苗子
還不錯啊，比我好太多(嚶
9 years agoReply
Wendy，Dani，Brian
噗哧XD不會啦，你也不錯哈哈哈哈XDXD
9 years agoReply
七日夏
寫的不會很爛啊！
光看描述就知道一定是個熟練的寫手，雖然有些錯字還有一點小錯誤，但是瑕不掩瑜啦XD
有表現出我想看的戰鬥場面，雖然描述不怎麼深刻，不過在戰鬥外，主角那份為國家的忠誠和服從我都明確感受到了(很抱歉以這麼高姿態的說法
9 years agoReply
Wendy，Dani，Brian
哈哈哈哈或許不到我想要的qwq
哈哈哈哈我知道錯字，剛才有人說了，告訴我在哪XDXDXD((錯字小天王
我知道，今天狀態不好qwq
哈哈哈謝謝((不會，這樣我才會進步ww謝囉
9 years agoReply
七日夏
@Wendy (Dani Melson)  希望有多少幫到你ww
9 years agoReply
Wendy，Dani，Brian
@七日夏,謝謝ww我會努力的(ง'̀-'́)ง
9 years agoReply
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