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福多多
對不起！但我想到有好幾對色瞇瞇的眼睛在偷看你的女主角🤦🏻‍♂️
3 years agoReply
dreameryuki
哈哈沒事啦 詩嘛，不同人讀有不同感受😂
3 years agoReply
W.H.
畫面鮮明，甚至，我也感受到那陣風了～

文字很清澈，感覺很敏銳，我很喜歡！
3 years agoReply
dreameryuki
感谢评论！我感到很欣慰！
3 years agoReply
W.H.
@dreameryuki,不客氣^^
3 years agoReply
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