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jau4jin4悠然
謝謝你的提點啊！
然後就是……啊，被拆穿了（⊙ｏ⊙）
看了幾位的評語也發現我自己的表現力和對於人物的内心刻畫、心理活動略顯不足，在標點、用詞這方面我會多注意些的！！
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jau4jin4悠然 sponsored 50coins for Issue 3!
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