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Esfandiar C. Hale
This is a really interesting story! I also like how you created your own phrase like 'who in the sky was that'. May I ask why you use sky? 

Also Mercer is really cool! And there can be certain advantages of being small and short. You can be swift and quick and u can fit into certain places too. 
3 years agoReply
RampantStrawberry
aaa haha thank you! im glad you showed interest even though i havent picked it up in a while. 


I use 'sky' because in their tribe doesn't worship a god/jesus so there's no heaven and hell. They believe that if you die you rise into the sky and become a star to watch over future generations. It's basically saying "who in the hell was that?" but their version. 

I also use 'spit' as a common curse word. 
3 years agoReply
Esfandiar C. Hale
@RampantStrawberry, Hm, that's interesting! Makes sense tho. 
3 years agoReply
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