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喵芭渴死姬
謝謝小紫布丁😍😍😍
不知小紫是否方便幫我指一下，大概是哪些地方太過密集或太短嗎？（對不起，作者視角有大盲點qwq）我之後修稿來看看怎麼去改善，謝謝😘
1 year agoReply
紫玖島
例如第6章 夏爾克跟維珥相遇時 有提到星盟剛成立 拯救幼崽的狀況 但一小段就又拉回比賽現場 這應該是日後的伏筆 只是突然出現在這 我會疑惑是不是哪裡漏掉 再請大大參考
1 year agoReply
喵芭渴死姬
@紫玖島, 好的，太感謝你了，我來研究看看～😘😘😘
1 year agoReply
紫玖島
@喵芭渴死姬,好的～～ 期待喵芭大大接下來的故事喔

不過好奇問一下 為什麼大大有想改書名呢？
我的奪取龍心在發表前也改過
1 year agoReply
喵芭渴死姬
@紫玖島, 因為有人反應書名跟故事風格不合，書名像走戀愛風，但故事比較偏劇情流，可能會吸引不到正確的受眾（艸

不過跟小熊討論後，換書名要換封面＝重新請繪師畫圖，而且也發表不少章了，所以就還是算了🤣🤣🤣
1 year agoReply
紫玖島
@喵芭渴死姬,原來如此 感謝大大解惑
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
這麼高產嗎@.@
1 year agoReply
紫玖島
衝啊 好看啊
1 year agoReply
是南末吶！
大專業了！！
1 year agoReply
紫玖島
我要跟上大家🤩
1 year agoReply
紫玖島
@喵芭渴死姬  喵芭大大～布丁送上心得
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
是不是在偷罵人！
1 year agoReply
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