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漪漣
非常感謝大大的閱讀和評價！我最在意的文筆和角色塑造被誇獎了真的好開心啊！！！
關於日常較多和主線推進較慢，其實我原本寫這一篇就是想寫角色驅動的故事，原本就沒有設定明確的主線，應該說，角色之間的關係和互動就是我的主線，我也是寫了之後才發現這種模式好少人寫，但我真的好喜歡那種光看角色聊天就可以把整篇看完的故事，希望有順利寫出我想寫的感覺。收束故事邁向結局的主線當然還是有的，只是可能就要到很後面很後面……🫠
最後再次感謝大大的書評，也祝大大寫作順利～
5 hours agoReply
比冥
感謝您的回覆，我做本次創挑的本意也是希望作者之間互相交流進步，能幫助到您我感到非常開心！
5 hours agoReply
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