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嘿嘿阿嘿嘿
怎麼說呢，給我一種繪本風格，以動物為主角的世界，行文特色也一幕一幕的，我覺得蠻好看的，建議可以拿去給小孩看看，雖然粉紅切開總是黑的。總結:整體幾乎沒啥問題，很可愛的開頭，把七大罪藏於劇情之中，個人蠻喜歡的
16 hours agoReply
鏡子Kyou
謝謝喜歡～不過給小孩看他們可能會哭XD
因為隨著篇章邁進，劇情會越來越黑暗。
也就是開門章的關係，第一個故事童話感還是比較濃厚的。
16 hours agoReply
嘿嘿阿嘿嘿
@鏡子Kyou,現在只看了兩章，挺溫馨....
14 hours agoReply
鏡子Kyou
@嘿嘿阿嘿嘿,對呀，很瘟腥
14 hours agoReply
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