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皮皮
哪來的鳥ouo
5 months agoReply
月穎靈
幽靈鳥(*¯︶¯*)
5 months agoReply
茗那
好可愛，感覺暖暖的風都吹到臉上了 (ᐤˊ꒳ˋᐤ)੭ु⁾⁾
5 months agoReply
月穎靈
有這個感覺真是太好了(៸៸¯ᗜ¯៸៸)
5 months agoReply
W.H. sponsored 1000coins for Issue 28!
好有畫面和聲音的詩！！

「唧啾，唧啾」吮茶聲和鳥鳴相互呼應，有意思😉
5 months agoReply
月穎靈
謝謝W.H.大大！其實寫的時候也沒想這麼深，就是覺得旁邊的鳥叫聲好響，就寫下來了XDDDD
5 months agoReply
W.H.
@月穎靈,很舒服的感覺！！
5 months agoReply
菜根
原來如此，我原本以為......是在描寫接吻的味道。
5 months agoReply
月穎靈
……？？？那可能會多一點觸感的描寫（X
5 months agoReply
菜根
@月穎靈,沒事+_+ 可能是R18看太多了~
5 months agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
@菜根,就是你髒髒！
5 months agoReply
月穎靈
@菜根,吼～≖ˋ-´≖
5 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
親身體會的部分嗎？那很用心了！
5 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
月月太可愛了！
5 months agoReply
月穎靈
哈哈哈哈剛剛好附近有符合我喜歡的畫面，待著，捧一杯熱茶很舒服啊～
5 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@月穎靈,果然，我們都已經到看風景喝茶的年紀了嗎？XDD
5 months agoReply
月穎靈
@AnFr安鍅,目空一切（祥和
5 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@月穎靈,阿彌陀佛～（XDDD
5 months agoReply
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