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杏言
謝謝你的評價！關於傷痛太美型這件事，你的觀察角度很新穎，是我這篇刊登至今沒有收到過的回饋。
因為在故事發生的時間點，男女主角已經是曖昧中的狀態，那因為他喜歡她，所以他對她的容忍度（？）很高，也就是就算被念也不會存在太多的反感。
但你說得對，我只有花筆墨刻劃他的傷感，沒有任何憤怒或者歇斯底里的部份，導致他的傷痛只是流於表面。看完你的評價我再把故事重看了一遍，在秘密被揭露的時候他的確應該更激動一些。（只好先歸咎於他發燒沒有力氣XD）
再次謝謝你抽空閱讀！
4 months agoReply
魚落井
關於傷痛呈現的部分包含了個人生活經驗的感想，或許過個幾年彼此想法又會不一樣了，而且每個人對於創傷的反應都不一樣，所以也不必把我的話當成絕對正確的答案 XD  

祝杏言寫作順利~
4 months agoReply
魚落井
@杏言
4 months agoReply
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