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我成功抹滅掉了 讚啦
我覺得如果以新手來說寫的很好了👍👍
9 years agoReply
Vitamin_K
謝謝妳~能受到肯定真的超開心

不好的地方也請多多批評喔~
以後也請多多指教~~><
9 years agoReply
REn
首先，我覺得逗號和句號應該要存在XD
然後我習慣把句子分很多段
我寫作不大行，少少的意見
9 years agoReply
Vitamin_K
謝謝妳~~我會改進的
文筆現在還不是很好
謝謝妳給我建議我會加油滴
9 years agoReply
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