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雅77
謝謝點出是故事情節由事件推動而不是目標驅動，難怪我每次寫連載都在犯同一個問題然後卡住🥲🥲
鐵血和詩音都有點出相同問題，下一次作品我會改善目標驅動的問題！

難怪寫的時候，一直都卡住在丹青，而不是添丁，因為目標使命感都壓在添丁身上，常常讓人出戲認為添丁才是主角
9 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
他們經常會要求章末要出現個鉤子，鉤子其實就是懸念或是事件的開頭或是關鍵道具之類，除了讓讀者想看下去之外，也是明確的讓作者知道，下一章的重點是甚麼，比較不會無所適從不知道要做甚麼!
9 months agoReply
伐伐伐木工
再麻煩看看我的<魔法工藝師>，幫我章節都按按愛心~
如果可以也希望可以留下心得留言~大感謝!
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9 months agoReply
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