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諾蒂西亞 sponsored 500coins for Issue 28!
10 months agoReply
嵐斕
感謝打賞✧⁠◝⁠(⁠⁰⁠▿⁠⁰⁠)⁠◜⁠✧
10 months agoReply
嵐斕
@諾蒂西亞
10 months agoReply
諾蒂西亞
其實我是還沒想清楚到底用哪個作開頭比較好🥹
10 months agoReply
嵐斕
@諾蒂西亞,目前我會覺得說書人的比較像開頭
但還要看諾蒂西亞大大妳後續的安排
有可能梨若的部分當開頭更合適🤔
供妳參考
10 months agoReply
諾蒂西亞
@嵐斕, 主要是能抓住起初閱讀意向的問題，或者現在的開頭都不夠特別
10 months agoReply
嵐斕
@諾蒂西亞,個人在這兩個開頭中，認為說書人的更好
10 months agoReply
諾蒂西亞
@嵐斕, 謝謝～ 但現在我又在想有沒有其他可能性，例如什麼更震撼的開場之類🤣🤣
10 months agoReply
嵐斕
@諾蒂西亞,期待(⁠.⁠ ⁠❛⁠ ⁠ᴗ⁠ ⁠❛⁠.⁠)
10 months agoReply
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