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語者
看了幾章，我覺得作者的文筆書用輕鬆路線、恰恰好

不過第一章好像太快進入主線了，雖然透過對白帶設定很好，但我覺得稍微有點過快，我都還不清楚誰是誰，還想說是不是漏掉了一章節

整體我認為沒什麼問題，不過校園戀愛不太是我常看的類型，尤其是這種日常甜甜番🤣

@黑靈外包給妳🤣🤣
10 months agoReply
Jin_z
哈哈哈哈哈！謝謝你呀~
10 months agoReply
黑靈
感謝語哥的輕鬆外包🤣
也感謝不看校園戀愛的語哥看完我的小說。
第一章就是故意安排男女主不小心接吻的部分，這就會有之後的劇情🤣🤣💜💜
10 months agoReply
語者
@黑靈,你當初沒寫肏翻天，未必會引起我的好奇🤣🤣🤣
10 months agoReply
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