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黑靈
請問一下，如果我要把對話延伸多一點，是否在這篇更新就可以了？
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1 year agoReply
falabilaba
是的
1 year agoReply
黑靈
哈哈，感謝你的提議，我會仔細想想的。
1 year agoReply
falabilaba
讚喔！其實就是把每個角色的特質展現出來，像一碗沙拉一樣。
至於不重要的龍套根本不用細心去分辨是誰在講話。
要不要再挑戰看看，如果試著把對話延伸多一點呢？
1 year agoReply
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