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Analia Whitlock
I really like how the story is going so far- despite you torturing the poor seven, i understand the need as i write myself. the only thing is that the past few chapters its been easy to forget whos pov it is. Ik you dont know me but i rly like seeing how your writing is improving (not that it was at all bad to begin with)
Ashy_Haze
No, I completely understand what you mean! Everyone can improve, even the pros. I know this book is a bit messy, I feel like I rushed it, and it’s a bit of a first draft, but I’m hoping to improve it in the future. Thanks for the comment!
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